Alicia Yang - Week 10

 

Thank you Seif, looking forward to your feedback!

Gwinny Mulders - Week 10

 

 

 

Hi Seif,  

I'm not quite done rendering the whole scene but I tried fix the values first. I also added some rays of light, do you think those are too distracting? 

Thank you again for any further feedback and all your classes, it was a great term and I learned a lot!

 

Paul Woodworth - Week 10

Hi Seif! I tried to push the contrast more closely to the reference image like you mentioned. I think now it's a lot closer to that but feel like I may have also added a lot more busy detail - and wonder if that has started to take away from the focus of the image.

I am also a bit intimidated by the idea of having to render details like leaves and tree trunks, etc when there are so many in the image to keep track of. I'm thinking maybe I should start with rendering details just around the focal point of the image?

Thanks for any further feedback, and thank you so much for a great class this term.

Lauren Bamlett - Week 10

 

Maria Cuellar- Week 10 Homework

 Hi Seif, I did all your suggestions and I definitely think it looks much better, I wanted to ask you, if maybe you could tell me if I could add something more to have more storytelling, I wanted to add this piece on my portfolio, but I feel it looks a little bit boring, so I don’t know if you could tell me if I can add or change some elements to have more storytelling or to maybe be more engaging.

Laura Heckert - Week 10 Homework

 

Winston Wijaya - homework week 10

What I did based on your last week suggestions:
1. I lighten-up the upper part of the focal point, also the character a bit.
2. Simplified the clouds form
3. Re-adjusting the value of trees in the background
3. Increase a bit of saturation so the color is not too dull. (this one is not one of your suggestions)

Thank you for all your lessons and feedback, it really helps me improve a lot. I learn how to set up an environment piece composition and how to create our own focal point. Good luck for your career and life. Thanks Again Seif!