Wednesday, September 15, 2021

Maria Cuellar- Week 10 Homework

 Hi Seif, I did all your suggestions and I definitely think it looks much better, I wanted to ask you, if maybe you could tell me if I could add something more to have more storytelling, I wanted to add this piece on my portfolio, but I feel it looks a little bit boring, so I don’t know if you could tell me if I can add or change some elements to have more storytelling or to maybe be more engaging.


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  1. Hey Maria! it definitely looks much better, great job! for more story telling, maybe the castle is being attacked by dragons swarming over or something? or its on fire and the knight is running away rather than going towards it? maybe he lit the fire? or it could be overtaked by wyverns or giant bats etc.. or perhaps a giant. all these could be cool ideas to try. great job overall though, i think its working pretty well!

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Alicia Yang - Week 10

  Thank you Seif, looking forward to your feedback!