Tuesday, September 14, 2021

Winston Wijaya - homework week 10

What I did based on your last week suggestions:
1. I lighten-up the upper part of the focal point, also the character a bit.
2. Simplified the clouds form
3. Re-adjusting the value of trees in the background
3. Increase a bit of saturation so the color is not too dull. (this one is not one of your suggestions)

Thank you for all your lessons and feedback, it really helps me improve a lot. I learn how to set up an environment piece composition and how to create our own focal point. Good luck for your career and life. Thanks Again Seif!

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  1. Seif RagabSeptember 17, 2021 at 9:02 PM

    Hey Winston! Glad i could help man, thats awesome to hear! i think it looks great, could use a tiny bit more of lighting up on the upper parts of the focal point and the character though. keep up the good work man!

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Alicia Yang - Week 10

  Thank you Seif, looking forward to your feedback!

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